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Rose Vines by ~Rainbowgirllover:iconRainbowgirllover:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Romantic > Other Romance > Open


Rose vines tie me down
Curling and twisting
Around my pale white flesh
Thorns tearing through
Red dripping down

My breath comes in gasps
As the vines wrap tighter
Across my chest
Around my neck
Taking my life

Unable to scream
Unable to move
Wishing these vines
Would leave me be
And never come back

The memories hurt
As their thorns cut my flesh
As they squeeze my lungs
Tying me to my agony
Reminding my of you
©2009-2010 ~Rainbowgirllover
:iconrainbowgirllover:

Author's Comments

So I had this idea in the car today and I finally got to write it down. I hope you like it.

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~hinatadragon1473 Nov 7, 2009, 3:48:35 PM
sounds fun. *sarcasm

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if you can't get someone out of your head, maybe they're supposed to be there
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~Rainbowgirllover Nov 7, 2009, 3:53:49 PM
Hahaha I know right?

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Like a game of pick up sticks played by fucking lunatics. - t.A.T.u.

From such a gentle thing, from such a fountain of all delight, my every pain is born. - Michelangelo
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~Riabbit---X Nov 7, 2009, 4:32:28 PM
Would it be possible that I could use this in a short story? I swear I'll credit it back to you.

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:pride: Eugene Riabbit Skittles
*GLBT-Pride-Club
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Ponfo miran!
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"If that wasn't sex why do I have the urge to start smoking?"
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Kling akhlami buhfik.
:iconrainbowgirllover:
~Rainbowgirllover Nov 7, 2009, 4:40:01 PM
Go right ahead!!!! I'll be excited to read it!!!!

And thanks for the fav! :heart:

--
Like a game of pick up sticks played by fucking lunatics. - t.A.T.u.

From such a gentle thing, from such a fountain of all delight, my every pain is born. - Michelangelo
:iconriabbit---x:
~Riabbit---X Nov 7, 2009, 9:22:44 PM
Thank you!
The second I finish my assignments I'll start.

--
:pride: Eugene Riabbit Skittles
*GLBT-Pride-Club
---
Ponfo miran!
---
"If that wasn't sex why do I have the urge to start smoking?"
---
Kling akhlami buhfik.
:iconrainbowgirllover:
~Rainbowgirllover Nov 7, 2009, 9:37:07 PM
I can't wait!!!

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Like a game of pick up sticks played by fucking lunatics. - t.A.T.u.

From such a gentle thing, from such a fountain of all delight, my every pain is born. - Michelangelo
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~Taki-x-Goh Nov 22, 2009, 4:52:00 PM
love the imagery!! *imagines it* :icondroolplz: :iconscaredplz:

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Forever Goh's

"When your head won't give you the answer, it's best to listen to your heart."
"I don't like the answer it's giving me."
"Then, my dear child, you can be absolutely sure it's the right one."
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~Rainbowgirllover Nov 22, 2009, 7:45:49 PM
Hahaha thanks!!!!! :glomp:

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Like a game of pick up sticks played by fucking lunatics. - t.A.T.u.

From such a gentle thing, from such a fountain of all delight, my every pain is born. - Michelangelo
:icontaki-x-goh:
~Taki-x-Goh Nov 23, 2009, 7:27:47 PM
:tighthug:

--
Forever Goh's

"When your head won't give you the answer, it's best to listen to your heart."
"I don't like the answer it's giving me."
"Then, my dear child, you can be absolutely sure it's the right one."
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